The Lost Command
By
Ed Benjamin
The
supreme commander of the expedition looked about the command vessel and
lamented. One expected losses, but the
losses in arriving at the target planet were very significant. Their home planet was 640 light years from
their objective. Each group of 350 craft
had been encapsulated into modules so that the invasion force of 1400 ships could
survive the jump through the space warp.
After the entry into near space had been completed, the control center
had determined that two of the modules had broken up in hyperspace and the
fleet had lost all 700 ships.
The
next calamity occurred when the remaining two modules had entered the target
solar system and one capsule spun out of control crashing into the frozen
wastes of the eighth planet from the star.
The remaining squadron had proceeded toward the objective, the third
planet from the sun.
This
journey through the solar system continued at a slower pace. The trip from the eighth planet to the third
planet took approximately three times as long as the trip through the wormhole.
The
intelligence section spent its time wisely.
The analysts studied the broadcasts of the microwave transmissions
received in the lower communications band.
Apparently the occupants of this world had not yet mastered the
intricacies of higher band transmissions.
These transmissions did indicate that the inhabitants were on the verge
of creating a viable civilization. The
planet contained the raw materials that the commander's home world needed to
alleviate the overcrowding that threatened their existence. Once determined that this planet was
suitable, the leaders made their decision.
They would invade, destroy the life forms ruling the planet, and
colonize it.
The
mission proceeded. As the capsule
prepared to loose the remaining squadron of 350 ships into the waters of the
ocean, a fire broke out and only a hundred or so ships managed to escape into
the depths of the planet’s ocean. Radar
did not detect these craft because the home world had miniaturized the
attacking ships. Size did not matter to
the success of this mission.
Once
in the water, Phase II of the operation commenced.
After
some confusion, the commander was able to rally the ships into a recognizable
formation and require them to adopt the disguise of small marine crustaceans
that abounded in plenty in these northern waters. In looking over the remnants of the squadron,
the commander found it hard to distinguish his ships from the other crustaceans
that frequented the same waters. That
settled, the commander began preparations for activating the Incubula. This incubula, once activated and dispersed
through the atmosphere of the planet, would carry the seeds of destruction for
every living being on the planet. Then,
his fellow travelers from home could make the journey and colonize the planet
in earnest.
As
the commander began to prepare to give the activation orders, he noticed that
the formation was becoming very ragged.
He gave orders for the ships to align in a chevron formation.
All
of a sudden, the command ship began to roll and it tumbled through a fine
mesh-like affair. Then the ship and all
the other ships of the squadron traveled down a long dark space. The occupants of the craft began to scream as
a powerful acid ate through the walls of each ship dissolving it. All the ships were destroyed before the
incubula could be activated. The mission
had failed.
The
planet, that its occupants called Earth, was saved.
The
two whales swam side by side. One whale
let out a powerful belch.
"What's
the matter?" one whale asked.
"Dunno,
must have been a bad bunch of krill."
"Do
you think they could have been something else?"
“If
it was, it was something very similar to it."
The End
Wow! This gets me thinking...what if? Your word choices are great for drawing a picture of the world you're creating. And I like how the story keeps moving, but still, the details are sprinkled in. Nice job. :)
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Nice and quirky.....a fun read indeed!
ReplyDeleteWell written and delightful, a pleasure to read. :-)
ReplyDeleteNicely done Ed!
ReplyDeleteThank everyone for their kind comments. Ed
ReplyDeleteThat's why we should stop killing the whales... They could prevent an invasion... Or maybe the moral of the story is... Size matters. :) Fun read.
ReplyDeleteThat's why we should stop killing the whales... They could prevent an invasion... Or maybe the moral of the story is... Size matters. :) Fun read.
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